WEBSITE MESSAGE & COPY AUDIT
Let’s make sure your website is one area of your business you don’t need to worry about
Are they excited to learn more?
Or are they left confused, unsure if you’re the solution they’re looking for?
Truth: your website can do (most of) the heavy lifting in your marketing. It can highlight the value you bring and the problems you solve. It can show how unique you are and how you’re best positioned to help your clients. It can allow your brand and authentic voice to shine through.
I mean, it can do a lot of things.
But does your website actually do that?
That’s hard to know for sure, right?
Because the thing is, you don’t know what you don’t know.
And you may be too close to your own business to see what’s missing from the big picture.
With my Website Message & Copy Audit, I’ll help you see your website in a brand new light. And make the most of its potential.
Together, we’ll turn it into a tool you can trust to capture interest, build connection, and convert visitors into hot leads who are interested in buying from you.
✔️ You want the fresh eyes of a professional on your existing website.
✔️ You want to quickly get clear, actionable feedback that you or your team will then implement at your own pace.
✔️ You want to take the guesswork out of optimizing your website without breaking the bank.
Book a free call and get the help you need to confidently relaunch your website to the world.
With my copywriting background and passion for user experience (UX), I go through each key page of your site to assess how well it serves your business goals.
This is more than a quick look. This is about bringing fresh, professional eyes to identify both strengths and missed opportunities. Here’s what I focus on:
Can your visitors understand what you do? Within seconds, visitors should get a clear picture of how you can help them. If they can’t, they may leave before they even begin to explore.
Home, About, Services, Contact—each page has a job to do. Is your homepage introducing you effectively? Is your About page building trust? I look at whether each page meets its unique goal or misses the mark.
Can visitors find what they’re looking for? Confusing site structures or scattered information can make clients feel like they’re navigating a maze. Let’s simplify the experience so visitors can focus on what you offer without distractions.
Does your copy make people want to take action? Every visitor should feel like you’re speaking directly to them, showing that you understand their needs. I assess whether your copy feels welcoming and is optimized to inspire clients to take the next step, like booking a call or contacting you directly.
You’ll receive clear, actionable recommendations to bring out the best in your website’s message and usability. No guesswork, no jargon—just straightforward feedback you can easily implement.
You’ll be on your way to a website that feels like an extension of your vision and values, resonating deeply with your ideal clients.
“Thank you so much for this. It is very helpful to have someone give professional “eyes” to something that is so new to me. I really appreciate it. All your feedback made complete sense and I will get to work on it right away.”
Yasmine Elkatsha, Integrative Health Coach
And voilà! You're now ready to optimize your website!
“I received some extremely useful and professional advice from Laurence, in a format that was fairly easily to follow, and which I am now busy implementing 🙂 It was very helpful to have a ‘third-person’ looking at my written work with their expert eyes and realising how even apparently small details can make your webpage truly shine. Thank you, Laurence!”
Natália Leal, PhD, Career & Life Coach for Expats
Just €257 (excl. VAT) for 3 website pages, everything included.
Then book a commitment-free call and let’s get your website to work as hard as you do.
Let me know the pages you’d like to focus on, and I’ll send you a custom quote.
Yes, no problem. Let me know which page it is, and I’ll send you a custom quote.
Once you’ve made the payment and sent back my questionnaire, you’ll get the review in your inbox within a week. We’ll then have our follow-up call within 2 weeks at a time that works for us both.
No, this is not a copy-editing service. However, I do make copy suggestions as often as possible. I also let you know about any potential pesky typos I’ve noticed 😉
Sure! Send me a note with your questions at laurence@twentytwo-consulting.com